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Christopher Van Name's avatar

The title alone, hints at what’s to come. Another brilliant piece!

Samira Wyld's avatar

Thank you, Christopher! Stoked that you really enjoyed this 🖤

James Pindras's avatar

There are times of such clarity, when the world falls away, leaving only the sounds we usually.disregard sharpening our focus and leading us to the edge of madness. A haunting piece, love. 🖤🖤

Samira Wyld's avatar

Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to read it and leave a comment. It truly means a lot 🖤

Horror Hangouts's avatar

you did a great job, building up the suspense

Samira Wyld's avatar

Thank you, Josh 🖤

Waving From A Distance's avatar

Terrifying ... as usual! I don't think you could have written this without having identified all those noises and smells yourself. Absolutely magnificent.

Samira Wyld's avatar

Thank you lovely. I’m stoked you thought it was magnificent and terrifying! I appreciate you 🖤

Cliff's avatar

Haunting how our worlds gave in quiet

Samira Wyld's avatar

Thank you, Cliff 🙃